Logline Review

Get feedback on your logline. If you don't have a logline, you don't have a story. Let's talk about the components you need.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Detailed Feedback
  • Logline Formula
  • Example Logline with your content

The First 15 Script Analysis

So... you're in the writing process but you don't know if you're headed in the right direction. Cue the crime scene music -- Development execs give you up to 15 pages to wow them before they decide to continue the read or trash your hard work. So let's take a look at your First 15. (cringe...)
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Scoresheet of achievement of structural dramatic beats including: Characterization, Dialogue, Storyline, Premise, Inciting Incident, Goal/Problem, Stakes, Formatting
  • Conclusion of current status of screenplay and quick advice for moving forward.
FILE REQUIREMENT: .pdf

Development Notes

So... you've written a screenplay. Good job! I understand the sensitivity of your story being your baby, and I don't care. I'll tell you what you need to hear not what you want to hear. The film industry is a hard one. Grow a pair! (smile)
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Logline
  • Recommendation: Pass or Consider
  • Extensive Page Notes (Incl. but not limited to: story, character, plot, structure, tone, formatting, areas of confusion and suggested revisions)​
FILE REQUIREMENT: .pdf

Convert to Final Draft

​So... you've written a screenplay, BUT you haven't the slightest idea about formatting. OR maybe you do, but you only have access to Microsoft Word, AND you don't want to have to push the space bar over and over again. OR you don't own Final Draft. Don't worry. I've got you covered.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Reformatting of script in Final Draft.
FILE REQUIREMENT: .pdf, .doc, .txt
​PLEASE NOTE: When a file is converted to .fdx, it NEVER converts perfectly formatted. I must go through the script page by page, line by line, to ensure correct formatting. THIS SERVICE DOES NOT INCLUDE PROOFREADING & PROPER FORMATTING.

Proofreading & Formatting

Yup, it's just what you're thinking. If the written word is not your thing, I got you. I'll dot every "i" and cross every "t" and deal with all those crazy rules of grammar and punctuation. I'll even make sure your screenplay is in standard script format.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Proofreading & Formatting
FILE REQUIREMENT: Final Draft (.fdx)

Script Polish

So... you've written your script. But let's face it, it's your first time at the rodeo. You want to make sure the formatting is correct OR the written word is not your thing and you need a proofreader. But larger than that, you've hit a bit of a roadblock and need help choosing the right path. Don't worry, I got you.

PLEASE NOTE: In order to purchase the polish service, you must first purchase the development notes service to ensure that we will be on the same page about the amount of necessary story editing. This is not a rewrite service. You can purchase development notes here.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Proofreading/Formatting + Minor story editing
  • Detailed notes on changes to script
  • Prerequisite: Development Notes
FILE REQUIREMENT: Final Draft (.fdx)

Script Rewrites

So... you've been writing and writing and writing and writing and... you've hit a point of no return and you're lost. Don't worry. I'll find you.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Development Notes to assess necessary work
  • Writer Consultation to devise plan 
  • Polish + Major Story Editing (Incl. but not limited to: character arcs, plot points, and overall structure to improve the quality of the story, clear up any confusion, redirect loopholes, and tell a compelling story)
  • Detailed notes on changes to script
FILE REQUIREMENT: Final Draft (.fdx)