Logline Review

Get feedback on your logline. If you don't have a logline, you don't have a story. Let's talk about the components you need.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Detailed Feedback
  • Logline Formula
  • Example Logline for your content
  • Turnaround Time: 2 Weeks

The First 15 Screenplay Analysis

So... you're in the writing process but you don't know if you're headed in the right direction. Cue the crime scene music -- Development execs give you up to 15 pages to wow them before they decide to continue the read or trash your hard work. So, let's take a look at your First 15. (cringe...)
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Scoresheet of achievement of structural dramatic beats including: Characterization, Dialogue, Storyline, Premise, Tone, Inciting Incident, Goal, Formatting
  • Conclusion of current status of screenplay and quick advice for moving forward.
  • Turnaround Time: 2 Weeks
FILE REQUIREMENT: .pdf

Development Notes

So... you've written a screenplay. Good job! We understand the sensitivity of your story being your baby, and we don't care. We'll tell you what you need to hear not what you want to hear. The film industry is a hard one.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Logline
  • Recommendation: Pass/Needs Development/Consider
  • Extensive Page Notes (Incl. but not limited to: story, character, plot, structure, tone, formatting, areas of confusion and suggested revisions)​
  • Turnaround Time: 1 Month
FILE REQUIREMENT: .pdf

Proofreading & Formatting

Yup, it's just what you're thinking. If the written word is not your thing, we got you. We'll dot every "i" and cross every "t" and deal with all those crazy rules of grammar and punctuation. We'll even make sure your screenplay is in standard industry format.

If your screenplay needs to be converted to .fdx for the Proofreading + Formatting Service, select the Conversion Add-On at checkout.

Turnaround Time: 1 Month
​FILE REQUIREMENT: Final Draft (.fdx)
PURCHASE SERVICES

Idea to Story

​Work with 1:1 with Shannan to take your story from idea to script over a 3-month period. Package includes:
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  • Weekly Jam Sessions
  • Development Notes
  • ​Polish (Proofreading + Formatting + Minor Story Editing)

Idea to Pitch

Work with 1:1 with Shannan to take your story from idea to script over a 6-month period. Package includes:

  • Weekly Jam Sessions
  • Development Notes
  • Polish (Proofreading + Formatting + Minor Story Editing)
  • Oral Pitch Prep
  • Pitch Deck