Logline Review

Get feedback on your logline from a TPP Story Expert. If you don't have a logline, you don't have a story. Let's talk about the components you need.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Detailed Feedback
  • Logline Formula
  • Example Logline for your content
  • Turnaround Time: 2 Weeks

Outline Review

Get feedback on your outline from a TPP Story Expert. An outline is a fleshed out version of your beat sheet. It is a detailed, sequential list of your scenes and the action that takes place in them to get your protagonist closer to or further from their goal. Outlines are the first step to writing an effective screenplay efficiently. 
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Scoresheet of achievement of structural dramatic beats including: Inciting Incident. Goal, Debate, Transition to Act Two, Trial & Error, Midpoint, Climax, Resolution
  • Conclusion of current status of screenplay and quick advice for moving forward.
  • Recommendation: Needs Development/Go to Script
  • Turnaround Time: 2 Weeks

The First 15 Screenplay Analysis

So... you're in the writing process but you don't know if you're headed in the right direction. Cue the crime scene music -- Development execs give you up to 15 pages to wow them before they decide to continue the read or trash your hard work. So, let a TPP Story Expert take a look at your First 15. (cringe...)
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Scoresheet of achievement of structural dramatic beats including: Characterization, Dialogue, Storyline, Premise, Tone, Inciting Incident, Goal, Formatting
  • Conclusion of current status of screenplay and quick advice for moving forward.
  • Recommendation: Pass/Needs Development/Consider
  • Turnaround Time: 2 Weeks
FILE REQUIREMENT: .pdf

Development Notes

So... you've written a screenplay. Good job! We understand the sensitivity of your story being your baby, and we don't care. A TPP Story Expert will tell you what you need to hear not what you want to hear. The film industry is a hard one.
SERVICE INCLUDES:
  • Logline
  • Recommendation: Pass/Needs Development/Consider
  • Extensive Page Notes (Incl. but not limited to: story, character, plot, structure, tone, formatting, areas of confusion and suggested revisions)​
  • Turnaround Time: 1 Month
FILE REQUIREMENT: .pdf

Proofreading & Formatting

Yup, it's just what you're thinking. If the written word is not your thing, we got you. A TPP Story Expert will dot every "i" and cross every "t" and deal with all those crazy rules of grammar and punctuation. We'll even make sure your screenplay is in standard industry format.

If your screenplay needs to be converted to .fdx for the Proofreading + Formatting Service, select the Conversion Add-On at checkout.

Turnaround Time: 1 Month
​FILE REQUIREMENT: Final Draft (.fdx)
PURCHASE SERVICES
Suggested for intermediate level screenwriters and up. The packages are not courses; they move at a rapid pace to get writers to a polished screenplay.

Idea to Script

​Work 1:1 with Shannan, our CEO and Head Consultant, to take your story from idea to script over a 3-month* period. Package includes:
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  • Weekly Jam Sessions
  • Development Notes
  • ​Polish (Proofreading + Formatting + Minor Story Editing)

*To be completed within 12 consecutive weeks

Idea to Pitch

Work 1:1 with Shannan, our CEO and Head Consultant, to take your story from idea to script over a 6-month** period. Package includes:

  • Weekly Jam Sessions
  • Development Notes
  • Polish (Proofreading + Formatting + Minor Story Editing)
  • Oral Pitch Prep
  • Pitch Deck
**To be completed within 24 consecutive weeks

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